Taken from WHY I TAKE PHOTO?!Ok I am definately not taking piss out of you Nor making fun of you. but I had to do this for your sake!.
first of all english is my second language so I never will be perfect in puntuation and gramma skills so bare with me.
but here it goes. Journalism requires very well structured punctuation and gramatical flow also it should contain some natural skills, capturing people's mood and their love for reading. No one will read unless it is very inviting to the people.
I think you are doing very well considering new to country and that. some poeple take grant for their language skill becasue they were born in to the language they speak. I bet you people cant speak KOREAN like me hahah
the best lesson I have learned while I was studying english was that take note and take other people's advice and also practice and practice.
so here it goes... ( I just have to fix it sorry do not get offended what I am about to do, I was in same boat when I was learning english for 1st time 6 years ago).
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There are times when some people ask me "why you take photo, this violates my right of privacy"
yes i agree. i am violating rights by take photo of you without your knowledge and most of times against your will. i admit that this violates your privacy........I can not say its Right thing to do.
but I am only new to this County and many people feel strongly and have great support to the website. some people disagree with my point of view and say hurful things like "f**k YOU! you are bad person!"
I do not know what is wrong or what is right! but what I know is that it must be causing them to say "f**k!"
I may have violated their privacy rights but i am journalist like anyone else who works at newspaper or television news.
but difference is I make report for the truth. it is not sensord like mass media it is not commercial news like mass media! it is truth media UNLIKE MASS MEDIA!!
Isnt all the newspaper is commercial? yes it is newspaper is sponsor by companies that is how it makes profit.
if sponsor company is bad and criminals will nbot be report by newspaper because at the end of the day they will sponsor newspapers and they might even black mail them saying "if you report about this which will cause our company bad names then we will not give you our money to you!"
So newspaper companies unable to tell truth!! I am not sponsor by anyone so i am KING OF TRUTH!!
yes. EXPECT TRUTH BY MY MEDIA!!!
I will report my content without fear!!! f**k YOU MASS MEDIA!!!
I DO NOT FEEL BADLY BY MY UNETHCALLY REPORTING!! ( I am not bound by the mass media ethics)
I will report every event of my daily life, i will not sway or refuse to report event because it is unethically...................why???...........because if i refuse to report event then i am not TRUTH MEDIA!!
I must truthfully report every event of daily life ...........understand this when you call me bad person or rude person! ( I understand becuase of this you may call me names but I DO NOT CARE!!)
YOU GO MAN and KEEP IT UP!
FARK YOU MASS MEDIA!!! or more like FARK YOU corporations!!!
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cheers
Joe